What Comes Between Cousins by Jann Rowland
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

In this P&P variation Colonel Fitzwilliam or as he is now known, Lord Chesterfield, accompanies the party to Netherfield. Charlotte Lucas has already left the area to become a governess which has brought Elizabeth closer to Mary. At the Meryton Assembly Darcy's behaviour is improved by the presence of the Colonel but their close friendship is tested to the limits when they both become interested in the same Bennet daughter. Thankfully villains abound in the story, and I even liked both Mr AND Mrs Bennet at the same time in the same story.
The only improvement I would have wanted would have been more concentration on the Colonel and Mary Bennet are they are the much more interesting characters.

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